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Already Wet

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I needed to pee. I really did.
I told my mom. I told my brother, and I told my friend.

But they just told me to wait until we got there.
Sing out loud, play with your fingers, or maybe braid your hair.
Do whatever you can.
But until we get to the water park, just please hold it in.

So I dug through Mom's purse and tried picking my teeth.
I kicked my legs against my brother's seat
Until he cried "Mom!" and I was told to stop.
I even thought about bunnies and wondered why they hop.

And when we got to the water park, I was already wet.
My brother cried 'Ewww' and Mom was really upset.
I wanted to cry, but my friend said it was ok.
Lots of people wet their pants and then never say.

So if you're ever on a long car ride
And the urge to go should arise
Don't feel so bad if all that squirming won't hold it in
For you are not alone my friend.
Another challenge wrote for :iconflash-fic-month:

This one had to be written in 30 minutes or less. This took about 26 minutes to write and has been sitting in my brain for a while. Someone suggested the prompt 'I needed to pee' and this sort of went through my head since. Now I finally wrote it down. I hope it gave you a chuckle or two.
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PapaSpank's avatar
Classic. Brightened up my night most excellently :P